After watching the first edit with the class and receiving feedback, myself and the rest of my group decided that we needed to change our ideas and techniques of filming and that we will definitely have to re-film previous footage. A big change we decided to make is to adapt the way we portray the narrative in our title sequence, as some comments were made about our narrative being unclear. Taking this into consideration we decided that instead of having the title sequence from our main characters point of view the film would be from the grandson or the sons perspective, this will make our title sequence more realistic and make more sense overall as we could not find an elderly man to play our original role. This change will allow us to add more shots and include more character in our title sequence which would help make the narrative clearer and our overall title sequence more visually appealing.
We also discussed adding a wider variations of shots, for example a close up of our main character doing up their bowtie, a close up of making a cup of tea and of them setting up the record player. Me, Oliver and Fiona talked about the soundtrack, we are unsure if we are going to use foley sound, such as the kettle boiling, to make the overall sequence more intense or to use a relaxing upbeat soundtrack to make it flow nicely.
We found this task very useful as we are now aware of what we have to improve and what we have to change as a whole in order to make our title sequence more appealing.
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